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Posted on Thursday, July 13 @ 05:01:31 EDT
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"Poetry: The Jessus Return" by ioanrusu
The Jessus Return
In a night,
I dream
that Jessus
will come
in my home
and I think
that I must
to prepare my soul
for the Jessus Return.
In a night,
I dream
that Jessus
will come
in my City
and I think
that we must
together
to welcome
the Jessus Return.
In a night,
I dream
that Jessus
will come
in our church
and I think
that we must
to prepare his Home
for resting
his soul.
In this morning,
I walk on street
and I see
so many
unfaithful people
and I think
that Jessus
has no reasons
to return
to us.
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The prayer of a slave
I see the people
walking on the Moon,
as a great step
of Humanity,
but,
day after day
I am working to hard
to enjoy
this victory.
I heard about people
with cars and planes,
with money
and celebrity,
but,
working hard,
day after day
I am to tired
to see them.
Older and older,
I am only preying
for love,
for home,
for bread.
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