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Posted on Wednesday, October 31 @ 23:28:18 EDT
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"Poetry: Only You" by red_tears
you say you love me
but not the way i want
now i am longing
for what i havent got
it suddenly just hit me
i can never have you
i'll go through life wondering
how much we'll never do
you'll be in love but not with me
i'll try to have feelings for others
you'll go on happily
as i become someone who never bothers
to care for anyone else
because i love only you
though you'd die for someone else
i've dreamt you'd live only for i
but you'll have someone you actually want
i would rather die
than not to have what i havent got
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