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Posted on Wednesday, October 31 @ 23:33:30 EDT
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"Poetry: for those who matter" by touch
thank you, for being a box that fits me,
always op en, never lidded.
for ma king
ti me
since i on ly matter here.
t hank you
for readi ng my words and
believin g them,
for letting
m y
e ternity and heaven be yours. thank you for not knowing the
p lane of my face,the colour of my
voice, or my body, just
the contour
of my soul. thank you for
making me a start with
c ountless possibilities
t o an end
that will
someday make me whole.
kinda corny, but as long as those who i want to read it read it, im happy :D
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"We all want to be the best we can be, but how many of
us can say we are truly objective?
You have read this poem, now let the poet know how you feel, and comment
truly.
As nice as it is to read "great poem"
it does not make us better and does not give us an indication of what
made it great.
Not all of us are literature students, remember to comment on things
like style, subject and form.
So leave a comment, and help others in this community"
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