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Posted on Wednesday, October 31 @ 23:33:50 EDT
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"Poetry: In silence." by hansboffmyer
In silence we sit,
never to be heard.
With our mouths unopened,
seemingly scared.
With nothing to say,
day after day
Armed with questions,
looking for answers.............,
still the words don't come.
How in life, you can take your chances
only to come too far, to ever come back...........,
I guess someone always ends up lost
Where do we go?, and what do we do?.
When you cant look at me, and I cant look at you.
Nothing to say, as we sit and exchange emotionless glances .
Thinking about, all those missed chances.
Thinking of what should have been.
When the end was coming, my eyes couldn't see
As time it passes me by, I'm the one left wondering why.
In silence we sat.
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"We all want to be the best we can be, but how many of
us can say we are truly objective?
You have read this poem, now let the poet know how you feel, and comment
truly.
As nice as it is to read "great poem"
it does not make us better and does not give us an indication of what
made it great.
Not all of us are literature students, remember to comment on things
like style, subject and form.
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