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Posted on Wednesday, October 31 @ 23:35:47 EDT
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"happy life" by gomogurl
Sunrise on the east side
Reflecting beauty in the tide
The sun emerges without a sound
Shining glowing gold and round
The sounds of birds in the air
The feeling of sunshine in my hair
A place to dream laugh and sing
Its the place with everything
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