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Posted on Wednesday, October 31 @ 23:38:18 EDT
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"Poetry: Beach Sunset" by hhxhhx
Wind on my hair,
Sun on my face.
I'm looking at the sunset.
I am at the beach,
Feet in the sand,
Toes are getting wet.
The sky fades from clear blue,
To green,
Then pink,
Then purple.
The darker it becomes,
Stars begin to pop.
the sky is lit by them,
It is now a soft clear black.
All of this I watch,
As I lie on the beach
In the sand
On my back.
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