Written by ina
i thought
you had some very good lines and strong emotion throughout your write.

Written by ina
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toucha toucha toucha touch me i wanna feel dirty thrill me chill me fulfill me creature of the night

Written by erinhunter10
poem
this is the first poem i ever wrote, i hope it was good! :grin

Written by VagabondRobb
Comment
it doesn't really transcend beyond the matter of fact of a rushed teenage love letter. if that's what you are trying to conve

Written by ina
lol
this [u]isn't[/u] a love poem for aaron.

Written by Lee

ok, this is better. it looks like you took more time on this poem. however, the simple straightforward image-less way you wri

Written by Lee

i'll comment, but usually a good way to get comments is to participate by reading other peoples stuff, commenting on it, and

Written by ina
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how beautiful

Written by liilshorty
plz
plz comment

Written by liilshorty
plz
plz comment

Written by ina
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Written by Lee

very dark, very consistent. i am a pretty big fan of poetry as abysmally immersed in darker images as this, probably because

Written by Amythyst77
Great Poetry!
i really like this poem..the imagery in it. i can picture this so well. pretty cool. xd

Written by Amythyst77
Great Poem!
i really like the line "she yearns to hear; words of comfort, to ease the fears." nice work.

Written by Amythyst77
Wow.
i love your poem!!

Written by VagabondRobb
Hey
really nice evocative insight. you need to get away from the city, go somewhere else- too many people trying to live their li

Written by opus
great job
you did an excellent job here with a lot of vivid observations in regards to a driving experience. truly a poem written with

Written by theartist
pointless title to comment on poem
this is written very bold and well..i find it akwardly more thought provoking then most i read. thank you for that

Written by theartist
blood tears and typos
you seem to give a mixture of strong emotions, and typo packed cliches. i would say wright completely based off the first qu

Written by theartist
title to comment..unneeded completely
he uses capitalized i's half way threw the poem if you notice..i've done this before when i was wanting to express a growing