Written by half penny
wow!
i loved this. not only does it serve the purpose that you set out to give it, but could be also seen as an explanation/explor

Written by Dark Peace
......!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
...and another thing, what happened to the image i submitted? all i see is the word image! baaaaahhg!! :sigh

Written by Dark Peace
BROKEN FORMAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
author's note: i apologize for the bad formatting. it's not how i intended it to look!!! webmaster really needs to fix this.

Written by half penny
Ah you're back
i'm glad i see you writing like, you'd do it all again. i love that line. i also like how you compared a relationship with a

Written by Thunder
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i picture a person growing old and having alzheimers with this write. i can feel the sadness and empathy for this person yo

Written by ammo323
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it was really short but i liked.. how it was put together especially 'you were never a monster don't pretend to be' that

Written by half penny
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i like this. it's got a tone of responsibility along with nostalgia and of course, the long for love. that's cool, keep writi

Written by ammo323
Ooops.
i didn't realize what the intro meant.. that's why it's repeated.. hah..

Written by Fish
hm..
if this was intentional, i like it! not to sound pretentiously artsy or anything, but it conveys a feeling of emptiness and n

Written by Fish
nice!
i was pleasantly surprised! it was good! i really like your style of guitar playing.

Written by bloodmagician
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to view the harmony of life and stand still. to love thy self and know thy will. then place yourself, forev

Written by stabby
thanks 4 the comment
fiction?no i only wish it was.

Written by razor
Scary
but very expressive. i really get drawn into your poems, but your latest is so long!! i`ll read that when i`m not looking for

Written by razor
hmmm
sounds like a bad crash. i feel a little sad when i read this and i honestly don`t know what to say. sometimes i feel to give

Written by Lightdancer
Nowhere Station
really interesting imagery! very intriguingly written! kinda scary! i really like your use of words. i am really glad i

Written by Lightdancer
finding Me
really intersting! rivetting descriptive words. i think this would make a really interesting prologue for a story! well do

Written by Lightdancer
sight unheard
beautiful imagery. you paint a deep emotional picture. has a beautiful melody to it!

Written by Lightdancer
who will fight for me?
very direst! strong1 i see you are fighting for yourself! very bold! well done! hang in there! you will fund a way! i'm

Written by Lightdancer
death of a heart
very emotional! deep imagery! well done!

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i found the poem very interesting...very complex!